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Big Daddy O'Reilly

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6/14/2011 11:24:12 PM

BDOR Rewrite: The Most Unforgettable Characters

In the scene where nobody reacted to B.J. announcing Frank's birthday in the Mess Tent, there's ONE person who would've, and probably should've responded...

*****

FRANK: Soldier, I'm confiscating this tapioca!

IGOR: I wouldn't do that, sir.

FRANK: Don't threaten me... *Takes a bite* Mmm! With raisins!

IGOR: No sir, flies.

*Hawkeye, B.J., and Igor laugh, as Frank grimmaces*

FRANK: Some birthday this turned out to be.

B.J.: Why Frank, you didn't tell us it was your birthday.

FRANK: Oh what's the difference? It's not important, nobody cares.

B.J.: Oh, you're being too hard on yourself Frank... here, I'll prove it to you... *Stands up* Hey everybody, guess what? Today is Major Burns's birthday!

*Silence*

MULCAHY: *Pause* Happy birthday, Major.

FRANK *Sadly* Thank you Father...

S.F.P.D. Commissioner McMillan's son

Posted:
2/7/2013 11:44:56 PM

possibilities
Big Daddy O'Reilly wrote:
In the scene where nobody reacted to B.J. announcing Frank's birthday in the Mess Tent, there's ONE person who would've, and probably should've responded...

*****

FRANK: Soldier, I'm confiscating this tapioca!

IGOR: I wouldn't do that, sir.

FRANK: Don't threaten me... *Takes a bite* Mmm! With raisins!

IGOR: No sir, flies.

*Hawkeye, B.J., and Igor laugh, as Frank grimmaces*

FRANK: Some birthday this turned out to be.

B.J.: Why Frank, you didn't tell us it was your birthday.

FRANK: Oh what's the difference? It's not important, nobody cares.

B.J.: Oh, you're being too hard on yourself Frank... here, I'll prove it to you... *Stands up* Hey everybody, guess what? Today is Major Burns's birthday!

*Silence*

MULCAHY: *Pause* Happy birthday, Major.

FRANK *Sadly* Thank you Father...

Good work, pal.
Anyway, it's nice, but calm.
Afterall, I've concluded research on a recent new idea I have called "RADAR VS. THE GREMLINS".

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