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congratulations
Big Daddy O'Reilly wrote:
Here's how I think the scene between Hawkeye and B.J. could've been better delivered...
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B.J.: And I'm miserable... I'm a happily married man, not like Frank Burns is happy because his wife owns real estate...
Hawkeye smirks and nods.
B.J.: I don't like being unfaithful! I'm not looking around, I'm lucky to have what I've got.
HAWKEYE: You're right. You ARE lucky.
B.J.: God help me.
HAWKEYE: Look, B.J... you stumbled last night, that's all. You were helping someone who had hit rock bottom... it may have progressed to more than that, but it was a mistake.
B.J.: I sure did.
HAWKEYE: (Looks at pad) What's that?
B.J.: (Sighs) I'm writing Peg about it.
HAWKEYE: (Pause) You're WHAT?
B.J.: I'm writing Peg about it.
HAWKEYE: What, are you crazy? (Grabs note and crumbles it)
B.J.: What are you doing?
HAWKEYE: Saving you from making another mistake... (Tosses note into stove)
B.J.: Huh?
HAWKEYE: Look Beej, you've already made the mistake you're being punished for, there's no need to make another mistake by punishing her too.
B.J.: What do you mean?
HAWKEYE: Do NOT tell Peg! Don't tell ANYONE what you've just told me... this is going to pass.
B.J.: Like a kidney stone.
Good work on this segment, too.
Also, I've good news, I hope to submit the title "RADAR VS. THE GREMLINS" within the coming months.
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